Blue Remembrance on a Waikiki Beach

Blue Remembrance on a Waikiki Beach
 
My third Blue Hawaiian was an azure pool in a glass, the colour of the shirt I buried you in, the sea glass on the bracelet you gave me on our honeymoon. Each sip, a memory. As the last ukulele notes faded, I drifted from the bar to the shore.
 
There, I wrestled jagged driftwood to my chest. The pyre would finally release you. I called your name as sapphire flames clawed towards the heavens. Then I unclasped the bracelet. The beads caught the firelight, a final constellation, before I let them fall dissolving into fire, into ash, into sky.
 
Mary Anne McEnery



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  1. Geraldine16 September 2026 at 10:11

    A lifetime condensed into a few lines - what a wonderful, evocative piece of writing.

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